OPENING SCENE: Jerry’s hands dance over a keyboard as he writes a new and improved mission statement for his company – that only gets him fired.
CUT TO: Jerry’s departure scene in which he pitches others to leave with him to start a new agency. Of course his pitch turns out full-on sappy and not a bit sticky, but at least the goldfish and Renee follow him.
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